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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Early do I rise < !signature-->I must get to work on time Shower and quick shave Brush my teeth and comb my hair Must hurry, no time to spare I stop to buy gas Doughnut and cappuccino I must stay alert No time for breakfast at home Now I'm racing off to work Traffic's light today No trucks or early school bus To make me late now The parking lot is empty DARN, it's Sunday, MY DAY OFF! ................................... Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol....this one made me laugh my head off!!...LMHO!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dennis...LOL, how funny reminds me of one time I was heading for church and I hopped on the highway heading to work instead. I love it but I hope you did not really do this.  [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; LOL! Very good. I hate to admit it, but I have atually done that, only once though. We are such creatures of habit! 02 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL Fortunately, I never made it out of the house before I realized I didn't have to go anywhere!Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i think this one is a winner  brought a large smile on my face...wonderful idea of yours...may i write a series of tanka also on my commuting experience....will post them when i have finished them ")show us more tankas! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
very amusing, Dennis.. brilliant tanka. ^_^ Lynne |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Great read Dennis I like your Tanka's Jon |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Good one, Dennis. You had me laughing at the end. Wonder how many of us will admit to doing the very same thing (of course, I am guilty also). Good read. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dennis, I just found this Gem- I'm glad it's not me but him But if it's hereditary- Then I'm in for something Scary!!! I enjoyed this very much Tanka, tanka, Tanka!!! David |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Much Thanks for all your kind replies, May this never happen to you, and if it does.....capitalize on it! LOL Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Heheheh - This is great Dennis, been there sort of...went to a dentist appointment I didn't have.....was supposed to be at the Dr. I thought it was good to even remember that I had an appointment...regardless of where it was. Bonnie |
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