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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-04-30 11:32 AM


Halo

Entranced
by the flickering light
of a single candle
Flame reflected
in the mirrors of her eyes
Surrounding her face
in a soft halo
of golden light

© 4/30/00
Gary Pence



 "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything."
- anonymous

© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-30 11:48 AM


Oh!!!!! This is simply beautiful....I really love it! Thank you for sharing it here!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-04-30 02:43 PM


Now this is so beautifully written!  Sometimes less really is more.  Have you given this poem to your love yet?  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-04-30 03:20 PM


Gary,
  This one is really SWEET! Write On!
                              Dennis :^)

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 2000-04-30 05:17 PM


Gary, Your poetry has a magic touch built in. A great gift you share here with us, thank you.  
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