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Did Not Remember

breezeinnc
Junior Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 47
USA

0 posted 2000-04-29 06:36 PM

Did Not Remember

Oh My Lord,
Why does Love cuse such pain
What the heart feels remains in the heart
and what must be said does not escape fom the lips

Oh My Lord,
Why does Love cuse such pain
The heart cries and eyes well up
but there is nothing left to say

I gave her all my joys
gave her all my smiles
and yet she did not care for my love
She did not remember me..
and now there is nothing left to say

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-30 07:04 AM

I can feel the pain in this one...beautiful expression of emotion.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-04-30 08:16 PM

Poem full of pain Breeze. I could feel the pain as I read.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-05-01 05:56 AM

Painfuly sad.
But well written

Jon

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