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breezeinnc
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 47
USA

0 posted 2000-04-29 12:12 PM


As i gaze upon you I see,
a flowering rose,
a poet's dreams,
a moonlit sky,
and feel a gentle breeze bringing  your scent..
As I gaze upon you.

As I gaze upon you I see,
a dancing peacock,
a deer in the woods,
a silk thread,
and i feel a gentle breeze bringing your scent..
as i gaze upon you.

And like the subtle scent that the breeze brings
I feel you
My mind whispers "no" .. but my heart cries out "yes"
Close
Close to me.



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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-29 02:46 PM


Very beautiful!

Denise

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-29 02:59 PM


Lovely! I wish someone would look at me and see what you describe!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

PrincessPoet
Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
3 posted 2000-04-29 03:10 PM


Very Nice,
   Romantic  


 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


Wikket
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
4 posted 2000-04-29 03:47 PM


I agree, extremely romantic.  I long for a person I can feel this way about...

           ~Jamie

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