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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-04-28 07:04 PM


Am I me or.......
no!no! I'm someone else
but I'm none to anyone
or do I conceal something....

I hail from the darkness
From the isles of lochness
There's none who should understand
Because they'll come to know where I stand

Am I me or.......
no!no! I'm someone else
but I'm none to anyone
or do I conceal something....

I laugh because I want to cry
Also, I always like to be sly
There's none who can see me cry
Before anyone see, my tears get dry

Am I me or.......
no!no! I'm someone else
but I'm none to anyone
or do I conceal something....

Always , I live a life in shadows
As I can't step into beautiful meadows
I'd construct my house in burrows
Staying away from dirty fellows

Am I me or.......
no!no! I'm someone else
but I'm none to anyone
or do I conceal something....

Life is beautiful and blissful
But with you in it it's stressful
I hate you ! I hate you !
You're my curse and I'll kill you

Am I me or.......
no!no! I'm someone else
but I'm none to anyone
or do I conceal something....

I know what I am
I know ! I know !
Don't even try for I'll be your sorrow
It's time to get into my burrow. See ya later

softened sounds...

Am I me or.......
no!no! I'm someone else
but I'm none to anyone
or do I conceal something....
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I just thought of my pet rabbit named Brownie and what's going on in his mind



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Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-04-29 04:58 AM


I Like this.

It reflects a common feeling of detachment well.

Jon

PrincessPoet
Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
2 posted 2000-04-29 03:30 PM


I agree with Jon

 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-29 03:41 PM


At the risk of being totally boring, I say that I too agree with Jon! Also, I think that you took an interesting viewpoint...your pet rabbit....I must try that with my dogs sometime!! Thanks for the idea...!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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