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Eyes
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 6
Edmonton Alberta Cannada

0 posted 2000-04-28 06:05 PM



What Love is to me


Love is saying I love you, and
meaning it with every thing
that is inside of you.
Love is letting go of your
mask that you hide behind.
Love is unconditional
with no strings attached.
Love is soft and kind,
but can be tough at times.
Love is given with open
arms and a open heart.
Love is peace and harmony.
Love should not hurt,
but at times it will.
Love is not perfect in any way.
Love comes in many forms.
Love is being able to,
love ones self first.
Love is being abel to let others,
love you for who you are.
Love is for all the right reasons.
That is what LOVE is to me.
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By Eyes
 

[This message has been edited by Eyes (edited 04-28-2000).]

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2000-04-28 06:12 PM


An honest poem and very well written.  I like your opinion on what love truly is.
If only everyone, men and women felt the same way.  Beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-29 04:44 PM


This is beautiful and heartfelt....I think your idea of love is rather lovely!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

PrincessPoet
Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
3 posted 2000-04-29 05:01 PM


LOVE you captured it well,
      one thing though, fourth line
      from the bottom you put abel just in
     case you didn't notice the misprint for
     "able"      


 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-04-30 08:12 PM


That's what love means to me, too!

Denise

Eyes
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 6
Edmonton Alberta Cannada
5 posted 2000-05-01 11:56 PM


I hope thowes of you who have had a chance to read my poems have enjoyed them because I enjoy wrighting it thankes for the suport
YOURS TRULY Eyes


 

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
6 posted 2000-05-02 01:51 PM


Truly beautiful.  Sorry about the whole, 2 replies thing.

[This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 05-02-2000).]

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
7 posted 2000-05-02 01:53 PM


I am SOOO glad this wasn't the ever so popular:

What love is to me
Is a conversation
When a guy puts his foundation
Between a girl's seperation
Do you dig the conversation
Or do you need a demonstration


Beautiful poem, expresses my thoughts in ways I didn't know anyone else understood.
Thank you

 Life defines no more than what it is you ask for.
April 20, 2000
Alicia A. Renzelman

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
8 posted 2000-05-05 01:19 AM


^_^ aah, nice poem.. I always find it is such a hard thing to write about; 'love'.. seems particularly useful words are elusive, or don't exist.. ^_^ Well done.. sweet thoughts..
One thing.. yeah, u spelt "able" right, and on line 11, u have written "a open heart" probably typo.. but should be "an open.." ^_^

Lynne

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
9 posted 2000-05-05 04:47 AM


Very nice.. I like it.  

 To oppose you is to deny the heart of friendship... To join you is to deny the heart of humanity. I am the earth... the fire... you are the sea and wind. Should we together be god? Or apart be nemesis...


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