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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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I have no name for this, i am not sure it is a whole poem.. i just wrote it on the spear (spare?) of the moment.. yesterday.. but I think it fits with the challenge.. ^_^ A little wrinkle, Smoothed by the voice, Of the cool, fresh breeze; Blue brook, Trickling over worn stones, Chortling happily, At cheeky dragonflies. I laugh, and then discover, No-one is listening, So the serenity and silence, Is not disturbed. -Lynne |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
This is cool,i really like it!! Especialy the cheeky dragonflies part....they are cheeky aren't they??¿  swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Are you sure it fits, Lynne. It's child abuse prevention month. So, hmm, this poem really doesn't sound like abusive at all (hehe). But yeah, i think whatever your contribution would be counted. Sorrow is the starting point of happiness. Without sorrow, a man can never realize the true meaning of happiness. Jõmes |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Lynne, This is perfect, I felt at peace as I read it. Thanks for meeting the challenge so serenely.  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is wonderful!! Dreamy reply to Lost Dreamer's challenge! Love and hugs, Lizzie PS "spur" of the moment I think... "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx swampie! yeah.. hehe.. I remamber I tried to catch one when I was about 7.. but it kept teasing me.. just staying out of reach.. hehe.. they are cheeky. ^_^ Yeah, i know it is james.. I think i put a poem up somewhere for that.. I think it was one of Kaile's challenges.. but this was in answer to a challenge from Lost Dreamer.. fto write a poem on tranquility.. so.. this was kinda not meant to be anything different.. hehe.. hey, haven't seen u here for a while, where did u go?? L.D.. well, I am glad it fits.. ^_^ I was not sure, 'coz it was just a little verse that kinda jumped out.. and I had not decided if it was whole or not.. ^_^ Thanx ESP.. well, glad u like it. Yeah, THAT's the word i was looking for!! ^_^ geez.. i haven't used it for so long.. actually, think I have NEVER used it.. just said it.. thank you! ^_^ Lynne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How about "Blue Brook"? Very peaceful sitting by a babbling brook. I spent many hours doing just that when I was young. Excellent poem Liz |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
how about "Nature's Delights" as a title?i like this very much--short,simple and so sweet scenes!  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
thank you both for such delightful suggestions for poem titles! ^_^ Thanx Liz .. yeah.. I love to just sit.. watching.. s'pecially to watch dragonflies just above the waters surface.. ^_^ A perfect title.. thanx.. Thanx Kaile.. Hey, i have a new poem form for you.. well, you may already know of it. ^_^ I have written one to show you... check my post.. "No-one and Everyone - a Diamond Poem" ^_^ brilliant title.. oh boy.. hehe, now I gotta pick.. ^_^ Oh, by the way, I did write a poem for Child Abuse week.. but.. I haven't posted it.. 'coz I think it is too delicate a subject, and I did not capture what I wanted to.. so, I would rather not, unless it says more or less what I want it to.. maybe I will later.. ^_^ Lynne |
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