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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Precious Key I knock door opens slightly I peek in slowly door slams in my face. Stand outside contemplate knocking again lights go out silence. Walk away confused is there hope or only sadness? Dark shadows appear saying nothing breathing emptiness crushing soul. Together forever what's it mean when precious key breaks in half? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, this is so sad, Gloria. Very well written. Denise |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Dear L.D., I sure hope you manage to mend that key or are given a new one...don't give up on that... Thanks for responding to my LOL poem... Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
As I was saying Gloria...lots said in few words here. Door slams...lights out...very rude to say the least...You deserve better....lose him/her. Jack |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Gloria, you just had the wrong door; that's all. ~Gene |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Such a sorrowful piece, and so well written, I feel your pain. Any kind of rejection truly is the rejection of the soul. I hope that one day you are handed the right key to the right heart, and only then will all doors open for you! This is by far my favourite piece of yours.Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise: Thank you for reading, sad yes, but I'll get over it. Lizzie: Thank you, I'm giving a nice cold shoulder right now...LOL Jack: thanks for reading and responding. It's not that easy, and I am very forgiving. Gene: Thanks for reading and responding, if it's the wrong door, then it's been for 20 years...LOL Melissa: Thank you, sometimes people just don't think, I'm sure I was half at fault. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Gloria, In the words of a great zen master... "whenever the other person is 100% wrong, it's always half your fault." ~Gene |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ I sure hope you're smiling again soon!  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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