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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271


0 posted 2000-04-23 12:21 PM


This is my first post in here so i thought i'd post my newest one.  It's not one of my better ones but that doesn't matter. So here it is

hanging in balance
don't let it fall
He holds the key
to release us all

Hearts of conceted pride
put man in this place
forcing Him to die
now look at His face

He could have touched the earth
if he had willed
you can almost smell the myrth
The prophecy is fulfilled

Written by: Hoppy
4-23-00

 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats.
-- Howard Aiken


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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-04-23 12:40 PM


This is excellent, it speaks volumes. Welcome to the pub glad to have you and we look forward to more of your poems.  
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-23 03:29 AM


Hey, Hoppy! Great to have you here! This a very good poem....like L.D. said, it speaks volumes. Well, I hope you stick around in here for a while!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
3 posted 2000-04-23 07:23 AM


Welcome Hoppy.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
4 posted 2000-04-24 08:58 PM


Welcome to the pub, hoppy

^_^ Nicely written.. yeah, I like this.. not one of your best? well, hehe, i'd loveto see your best then!

Lynne

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