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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Tranquilness The sun beamed down and touched me softly as the sand drew itself over toes grasping on. I felt the aura of an angel caressing my heart as the waves of tranquility danced before me. Soul opened wide pouring champagne cheers as though this were my very last day to feel. When could I come again to this tranquilness, feeling my whole self connected beyond life? The chill felt down my neck just angels breath blanketing me in a cocoon of heavens loveliness. At this place I let all go and feel tranquility's arm embrace me and cradle away all my insecurities. ~Here's the challenge, please write about a person, place, or thing that brings tranquility into your life.~  |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Lovely poem, Gloria. O.K. I've got one, but I can only post an excerpt--the rest of it will get banned from Passions. ~Gene |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I was gonna say "lovely poem" but Denise beat me to it!! This is a very pretty poem and I sure enjoyed reading it! Love and hugs, Lizzie PS About the challenge, I'll post something tomorrow in response I think *yawn* I'm kinda tired now...just about time to sleep! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This just oozes tranquility! Very beautiful, Gloria! Denise |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
In Agreement with DSnyder... And, its very peaceful too Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i like this challenge! you also have a very beautiful poem here! rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
this is very beautiful.. I take you up on that challenge.. hehe.. I'll post something tomorrow.. k? yes.. a feeling I love.. ^_^ Lynne |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
delightful poem and delightful challenge...i will take you on this challenge |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I think I already have. All of my happy poems are about the one person who brings traquility to my life through our friendship. I'll try to come up with another one though. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Gloria, i hope you wont mind me bumping this up again but there are several new poets at the Pub and i thought it would be interesting for them to try on this challenge this is one of my favourite challenges as it let me have a peek into the mindsets of our poets here and i am now eager to do that again |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ This is such a poem of serenity. I would feel that perhaps it is one of the best ones I've read from you. To find tranquility within ourselves is to spread peace to others. *Kaile - Thanks for the 'bump'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Really beautiful. Left me breathless. "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so beautiful! Peace exudes from every beautifully written word. I'll join right in on this terrific challenge. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This is great !! I'm going to try to post a response to the challenge as well might take awhile but ..., I've missed this place and it's wonderful poetry !! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Astounding, LD! hmm tranquility...never thought of it much before...u've got me going, might post an attempt...tomoro *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent work, Lost Dreamer.... WOW what a subject to write about... well, you have my offering on the same right here... see if it fits the bill... regards, sudhir |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank all of you so very much, glad you enjoyed this, and for those that took the challenge, thanks for diving in. |
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