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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Now it is morning I want my poem perfect Now it is evening |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this!! Very creative, Ted! I love it! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ted, Way to go! Very nice! Have any more? Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
LOL It takes a long time to perfect a perfect poem what else is your goal ~Gene |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Yeah, I can relate to this one too....only no matter how hard I try, it doesn't get to be a perfect poem...lol! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent, I love this |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you,Ted so muuch for stopping by....lovely haiku for me....may i keep it? thanx ")  |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Aren't we all the Perfectionist Poets  SPLENDID Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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