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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2000-04-21 08:43 AM


Sorry people, this is a repost and done only recently. I just though it was an appropriate answer to Marina's challenge...

Daddy loves me.....

Daddy comes into my room each night
And as he does, fear I fight.
He says he loves me very much,
Then he removes my nightie and starts to touch.
All over me his fingers run,
He tells me this is our fun.
That was enough for him in the distant past,
Now for alot longer these sessions last.
He gets into my bed and together we lie
Soon comes pain that makes me want to die.
Why does Daddy's love hurt me so?
I want him to leave but I can't make him go.
Daddy says what we do is special,
He calls me his "little rose petal".
I told Daddy that he makes me sore down below
But he acts as though he doesn't know.
Do all little girls have daddies like mine?
If they do, does that make it fine?
I want Mommy to come and make everything okay,
But she doesn't know and I'm not allowed to say.
Daddy says my body is his to use
And that if I say anything we both will lose.
I've always been Daddy's girl,
And will be until the secrets unfurl.
I don't think Daddy understands how much this hurts me...
If he did, wouldn't he cease this torture and let me be?




 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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kaile
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1 posted 2000-04-21 08:53 AM


can sense this little girl's helplessness and despair...well done  ")

Little girl's plea

Why
Touch me
There down below
When it hurts so,
Daddy!!

an informal cinquain for you  

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-21-2000).]

Marina
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2 posted 2000-04-21 11:30 AM


Thank for postin in here ESP.

Marina

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3 posted 2000-04-22 03:32 PM


ESP~
Tenderly portrayed.
~*Marge*~


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twinsgd
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4 posted 2000-04-23 07:51 AM


Well done again Lizzie

Jack

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-04-23 08:48 AM


Marge-a reply from you makes my day!
Twinsgd-Thank you for your "well done"

Love and hugs to all!
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Honeybee
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6 posted 2000-04-23 10:06 AM


A bittersweet piece to read, but so very well written and expressed.  No child should ever have to live through this.  Thank you for sharing this with us  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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