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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-04-21 01:49 AM


Always

Always have I loved symphonic sounds that
ride the breeze
Always have the cherished strains of music
Danced with ease
Always have I thought I’d heard the
Perfect melody
Until a poet wrote a lovely verse
For only me

Always has the meadow lark enchanted
With his tune
Always did my heart the plucks of angel
Harps consume
Always did emotion pour with sound
Of sacred hymn
But tears of love swelled in my heart
When verses came from him

Always will I love the beautious sound
Of meadow lark
Always will my spirit onto music’s
Path embark
Always will the songbird’s tune brush through
The willow leaves
His poetry forever more will put my
Heart at ease

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-04-21 03:27 AM


mmm... what a dreamy poem! ^_^ I love reading your poems, Liz! this is just beautiful.. well written, lovely words.. ^_^
quite a special poem, that's for sure.. Always... always... ^_^ nice

Lynne

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-21 07:06 AM


Beautiful....truly lovely poem, Liz! Your talent and way with words is just amazing!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

kaile
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Member Ascendant
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
3 posted 2000-04-21 08:19 AM


Always
Will I
Embrace the wind,
Running lush green pastures
Joyful

Always
Will I
Marvel at talent
Emanating from your fingertips
Easily!

that was informal cinquains BTW...and may i ask which poet has captured your heart so? ")

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-04-21 11:35 AM


Very beautiful, Elizabeth!

Denise

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
5 posted 2000-04-21 02:56 PM


Always do I love to read
Your lovely poetry.


Gene
  

PrincessPoet
Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
6 posted 2000-04-21 10:43 PM


Beautiful Poem Elizabeth
   I reads like a melody  


 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


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