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Jonas
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0 posted 04-20-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for Jonas   Email Jonas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jonas

Aura

The aura that surrounds me
is a manifestation
of the beauty I carry within.
Your image;
A colorful portrait
lovingly painted
by a master's hand
on the walls of my mind

4/20/00
Gary Pence



 "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything."
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1 posted 04-20-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Short and sweet.  Read it, read it again, then read it again...all I can say is, 'oooooooo...nice'.

Quite a gift you have there....keep it up.  


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2 posted 04-20-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Lovely sentiments, nice metaphor.  

~Gene
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3 posted 04-20-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Gary!

Denise
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4 posted 04-21-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

*sigh*...lovely and dreamy!

Love and hugs,
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5 posted 04-21-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for PrincessPoet   Email PrincessPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessPoet

Very Nice,
   Thanks for sharing it with us Jonas


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-Yoruba Proverb

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Yu Lan
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6 posted 04-22-2000 03:04 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

nice, Jonas.. sweet.. and true, eh? ^_^
Aah, I must look for some more.. this is quite a poem u have here ^_^

Lynne
Jonas
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7 posted 04-22-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Jonas   Email Jonas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jonas

Thank you everyone  

I really love this one also. This poem wrote itself.

 "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything."
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8 posted 04-22-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for twinsgd   Email twinsgd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twinsgd

Very nice Jonas
Dim the lights someone I'll bet he glows in the dark.
Nice feeling.

Jack
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9 posted 04-23-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm always sort of "backwards", so I guess that's why the first 3 lines are my favorite!  Usually it's the poems ending that pulls me, but not this time!  You said so much there....wow!  I love the whole aura thing...my grandmother has taught me alot about them, although I still don't understand it all.  Very interesting though!  Lovely work here sir!  
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Gary~
A lovely aura indeed.
~*Marge*~


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This is excellent, I love it  
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whew! nice!
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