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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Yikes! A punch from the left now one from the right yikes, I need to duck. There all around me they won't go away I want to run very far, but I can't. No where to go I can't escape them. Yelling and screaming through my mind, shut up I say! They don't listen to me minds of their own, who do they think they are? Maybe I should send them an eviction notice for cruelty don't know if I can evict them they don't pay rent, they're just there. Oh no, they're inside now pounding like a hammer I grasp my head in my hands what am I gonna do with them? Relentless in their journey to anger me beyond reason, they'll go away, they have too cause it's my mind. I'll show them who's boss I'll turn off their electricity if they have no connection to my senses they can't harm, then my smile shall return to where it belongs.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, just disconnect those little buggers!! Very creative, Gloria! Now let's see that lovely smile!!  Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
WOW! nice poem from a child's pov  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
OMIGOD... you have some people in your head punching you, Gloria? Perhaps you've spent too much time in the 'stute?!?!?!? |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
maybe it's just me, but that looked like an avid description of someone who has multiple personalties due to extreme physical trauma...i liked the piece. rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise: Thank You, I took a very beautiful walk and disconnected them, just to much sitting in the house behind this computer, but I am refreshed now Kaile: Thank you Doreen: Thanks for stopping in and reading, you have me, ROTFLMAO just a mere case of an unsettled mind, but nature took care of it. rich-pa: Thanks for reading glad you enjoyed it. multiple personalities maybe but all in fun...LOL never any physical trauma I can remember,ah I forgot what are we talking about...LOL Thanks again I am totally sane as you can be and still be free...LOL |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Good one, Gloria. You know what they did in ancient times? They drilled holes in peoples heads to release the demons. The operation was always a success, but the patient died. ~Gene |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Gene, Thank you, you snuck in while I was responding, I think I will pass on that therapy, a walk in nature worked much better thank you...you had me laughing which helped even more, thanks |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Hey!...great comeback L.D. When these are ancient times will they look back to here and say, "Hmmm.....a walk in the park eh!" Jack |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Glad you are back on top of things, L.D....don't let 'em monsters do that to you again!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ ? You okay there, gal ? Yikes ! I almost missed this ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hey, thanx Marge, for bumping this up, I wouldn't have seen it otherwise ^_^ well written, L.D.. hey, don't let 'em damned critters get the better of u, eh? they are a bugger, though, aren't they!! I've had more than MY share of them.. and they STILL come back.. just show 'em whose boss.. in a manner of speaking.. hehe.. well, if ever a walk in the park doesn't work, u just drop me a line, and I'll get out the ol' bashing club, and scare 'em right back to where they belong! or... of course... there IS always gene's method.. LOL. aah, u r a great person, Gloria Lynne |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very Nice |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A little ducking and diving never hurt anybody Nice one LD Jon |
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dreamer1775 Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20florida |
very good poem |
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PoohBear24 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Tampa, FL. |
Don't you just hate it when they think your brain is a punching bag? I know I do! Glad it seems to have stopped for the time being. This was greatly written, kept me in suspense. Finish your beer--There are sober people in China! |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
different but very nice breezeinnc |
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