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achicade
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since 2000-04-02
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Marietta, GA USA

0 posted 2000-04-19 10:58 PM



My prayers were answered when you came to me,
that sunny day in June
I knew in my heart you were for me,
I felt I could reach the moon!

You said "I love you" and I felt in my soul
that what you said was true
Now I don't know how I made it this far
without knowing and loving you!

Sunshine, laughter, clouds and rain
we'll never go through them alone again

And each time you reach out for my hand,
I thank the Lord you are my man!

So take my hand and say you'll stay
by my side, forever and a day.



 God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-

© Copyright 2000 debbie hill - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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1 posted 2000-04-19 11:26 PM


Perfect Partners

Butterflies soar free~
Sparrows chirping their song~
You,Me forever

Glad you have found your life partner  ")  
may i write the above haiku for you?  

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-19-2000).]

achicade
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2 posted 2000-04-19 11:34 PM


Thank you Kaile....very pretty haiku!  ) hugs
Denise
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3 posted 2000-04-20 01:57 PM


Very beautiful, Debbie!

Denise

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Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-04-20 02:48 PM


This is lovely, Achicade!! I sure hope that you and your perfect partner get your forever and a day together!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

PrincessPoet
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since 2000-04-15
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Long Beach, Calif.
5 posted 2000-04-22 01:46 AM



Hi Debbie:

Sweet Poem, once u find True Love
Hold on for Dear Life;
Love is all u Need (I think the Beatles said, That)  


 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
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6 posted 2000-04-22 02:19 AM


well, I'm glad u have someone to feel this way about.. he sounds a very lucky guy.. a special feeling, a special poem ^_^

Lynne

twinsgd
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7 posted 2000-04-22 08:41 PM


Debbie...Thanks for sharing such wonderful feelings with us.
Great poem

Jack

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8 posted 2000-04-23 01:29 AM


Very beautiful poem.  
Honeybee
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9 posted 2000-04-23 05:26 PM


One word: BREATHTAKING!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

achicade
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA
10 posted 2000-04-27 08:04 PM


Thanks for all your wonderful comments.  Melissa Honeybee...what a cooool name!
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