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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-04-19 09:32 AM


A TIME

There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that decisions hard are made.
There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that man is afraid.

A space in time
  of aimless kind
    a searching of our own.
A touching care
  a searching stare
    a feeling all have known.

There comes a time
  for each and all
    to wonder at the sky.
There comes a time
  when love we find
    and softly kiss goodbye.


     DanielJ.Burt
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© Copyright 2000 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-04-19 01:39 PM


There is definatly a lot of wisdom to this.  Welcome to the Corener Pub.  It's always nice to see new people with so much talent.

 Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-19 02:55 PM


This is beautiful and so full of wisdom. What a poem, no wonder you got it published!! Welcome to the Corner Pub!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

PrincessPoet
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
3 posted 2000-04-19 03:27 PM



I Agree this poem is truely rich in wisdom,
Enjoy!!!



 You failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
4 posted 2000-04-20 09:19 AM


Thank y'all for the input and the warm welcome-
please excuse the typo...then should not
appear in line three{sigh}
thanks again...
             b

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
5 posted 2000-04-25 03:18 AM


well, not a lot I can say about this poem.. it is well written.. umm.. wise words.. aah.. ordered thoughts.. just... really good. ^_^ bleeding.. bleeding.. any reason for this unusual username? ^_^ sorry, i am a curious person.. hehe

I like your poetry.. u have a lot of talent..

Lynne

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
6 posted 2000-04-25 01:46 PM


I agree. Wisdom abounds in your piece, Bleeding .... Congratulations on the publication .....  
John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
7 posted 2000-04-25 02:41 PM


Excellent. Congratulations.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
8 posted 2000-04-26 06:16 PM


thank you, ah thank you very much

  bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"



passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-12-25 10:35 AM


well done!
Annie78
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Posts 469
here then there then back here
10 posted 2005-02-28 03:07 PM


was this a preminision even then? what could i do to change things? can things be changed?
Annie

Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
11 posted 2005-11-15 11:33 AM


tramp i guess the more things change the more they stay the same....thank you for the kind words
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2005-11-15 12:19 PM


Daniel~
Not sure where I was (or wasn't) when this first appeared ... but I reckon I missed it~
Glad it came round again~

I ONLY liked THIS PART of it, though~

'There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that decisions hard are made.
There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that man is afraid.

A space in time
  of aimless kind
    a searching of our own.
A touching care
  a searching stare
    a feeling all have known.

There comes a time
  for each and all
    to wonder at the sky.
There comes a time
  when love we find
    and softly kiss goodbye.'


Yeppers ... that much !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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