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Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...


0 posted 04-19-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for Tramp Poet   Email Tramp Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tramp Poet's Home Page   View IP for Tramp Poet

A TIME

There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that decisions hard are made.
There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that man is afraid.

A space in time
  of aimless kind
    a searching of our own.
A touching care
  a searching stare
    a feeling all have known.

There comes a time
  for each and all
    to wonder at the sky.
There comes a time
  when love we find
    and softly kiss goodbye.


     DanielJ.Burt
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© Copyright 2000 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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1 posted 04-19-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for blackhalo   Email blackhalo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blackhalo's Home Page   View IP for blackhalo

There is definatly a lot of wisdom to this.  Welcome to the Corener Pub.  It's always nice to see new people with so much talent.

 Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman
ESP
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2 posted 04-19-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is beautiful and so full of wisdom. What a poem, no wonder you got it published!! Welcome to the Corner Pub!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
PrincessPoet
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3 posted 04-19-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for PrincessPoet   Email PrincessPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessPoet


I Agree this poem is truely rich in wisdom,
Enjoy!!!



 You failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet
Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...


4 posted 04-20-2000 09:19 AM       View Profile for Tramp Poet   Email Tramp Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tramp Poet's Home Page   View IP for Tramp Poet

Thank y'all for the input and the warm welcome-
please excuse the typo...then should not
appear in line three{sigh}
thanks again...
             b
Yu Lan
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5 posted 04-25-2000 03:18 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

well, not a lot I can say about this poem.. it is well written.. umm.. wise words.. aah.. ordered thoughts.. just... really good. ^_^ bleeding.. bleeding.. any reason for this unusual username? ^_^ sorry, i am a curious person.. hehe

I like your poetry.. u have a lot of talent..

Lynne
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6 posted 04-25-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I agree. Wisdom abounds in your piece, Bleeding .... Congratulations on the publication .....  
John the cat
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7 posted 04-25-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for John the cat   Email John the cat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for John the cat

Excellent. Congratulations.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.
Tramp Poet
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8 posted 04-26-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Tramp Poet   Email Tramp Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tramp Poet's Home Page   View IP for Tramp Poet

thank you, ah thank you very much

  bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"


passing shadows
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9 posted 12-25-2004 10:35 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

well done!
Annie78
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here then there then back here


10 posted 02-28-2005 03:07 PM       View Profile for Annie78   Email Annie78   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Annie78

was this a preminision even then? what could i do to change things? can things be changed?
Annie
Annie78
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here then there then back here


11 posted 11-15-2005 11:33 AM       View Profile for Annie78   Email Annie78   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Annie78

tramp i guess the more things change the more they stay the same....thank you for the kind words
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 11-15-2005 12:19 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Daniel~
Not sure where I was (or wasn't) when this first appeared ... but I reckon I missed it~
Glad it came round again~

I ONLY liked THIS PART of it, though~

'There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that decisions hard are made.
There comes a time
  in each man's life
    when that man is afraid.

A space in time
  of aimless kind
    a searching of our own.
A touching care
  a searching stare
    a feeling all have known.

There comes a time
  for each and all
    to wonder at the sky.
There comes a time
  when love we find
    and softly kiss goodbye.'


Yeppers ... that much !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

 
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