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the bard
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since 2000-04-14
Posts 6
Chapel Hill, NC

0 posted 2000-04-18 05:22 PM


Small town America, fruit of the land,
I know you better than anyone can,
I’ve driven you’re roads and read your signs,
Bought your clothes and eaten your food; played the fool
While kissing your daughters;
I have fished your waters.

I have sat down beside the men who run your show,
I have sweat in the sun and near froze in the snow,
Been scoffed and applauded,
Lied to, beat up, and cheated
While down and defeated by the times.

I held your god in the palm of my hand
In the drive thru lane of McDonalds.
It was green, and it smelled funny.


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rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
1 posted 2000-04-18 07:20 PM


that was awesome!  it reminds me of my good friends style very much!  keep up the good work because i have thoroughly enjoyed your poetry so far!

rich-pa

 "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-04-19 06:05 AM


Yep it's a shame those burgers mean so much to so many.

A point well written.

Jon

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-19 08:33 AM


lol...cool poem with a good point in it. It took me a few seconds to cotton on to what your last three lines, meant! Great job!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
4 posted 2000-04-19 10:41 PM


Great poem Bard, enjoyed this
If smelly green stuff a problem , let me know , be glad to help. LOL

Jack

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