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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Poetry, music < !signature-->a lovers' serenade for an unfulfilled heart. jk What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Joannak! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love this Joannak ! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now this is a beautiful, perfect haiku! Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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Ariadne New Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 8 |
Wow, and all in so little syllables! this is a haiku i'll remember for sure! -tara |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Very nice! This haiku could just as easily be a wonderful senryu. Usually, the two are very different, but this fits both categories. ~Gene |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very good, I only wish that I could write a haiku. Unfortunatly, I can't. I'm into the whole long, type thing! Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Joannak, Very nice! Don't stop now! Let's see some more! Dennis :^) |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Joanna, Somehow, I suspect this simply impressive creation, with its clarity of presentation and eloquence, only plumbs the surface of your poetic heart. You touched "me" with this one. INclan |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely haiku!!i only wish i had thought of it!!! looking 4ward to reading more ") |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely haiku...keep posting em!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Very Sweet, Haiku Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Wow, thank you all for your wonderful responses. I really enjoy the style of haiku, short, but filled with many images. Gene, I am intrigued by your mention of senryu, but you must explain to me what it is? Once again, thanks to Denise, Munda, Melissa, Ariadne, Gene, Alicia, Dennis, INclan, kaile, Lizzie and Princess. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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