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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-04-17 03:00 PM



Just let it go, girl.
Bigger fish dwell rather elegantly
In the sea you yearn
To find your very own discovery.
Never quite felt like this.
Can't find the words to phrase,
Or the symbol to represent.
Miles shearing it off;
Up and left without a second thought.
It's over and done with-
Completion and clarity rushin' in.
Smiles can't help but glisten
With tears that taste of bitter and
Sweet.
Delivered my own walking papers,
Kicked my self to the curb.
Faith; my only airbag.
Grace; my only fuel.
And it feels truer than the blue
The blue sea has called me home.


*****kynder


 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



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blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-04-17 03:48 PM


OK, It's just too true to even scare me!
Congratulations on a poem well done!  Things will always get better!


 Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
2 posted 2000-04-18 12:42 PM


WTG Kynder...sounds as if you are pulling yourself up by the boot straps.
Good poem

Jack

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2000-04-18 02:59 PM


Liked your poem a lot ! Well done.
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