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Sing Once More ( For Martie)

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 04-17-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sing Once More

Sing your sweet, sweet song once more
Before you go away
Strum the notes on your guitar
Just like you used to play

Step upon the stage of life
Let me hear you sing
Of friends and love and promises
That life will surely bring

Pluck the heartstrings, sound a chord
Strum a melody
Make my heart dance to the rhythms
Meant for only me

Make the music fill my spirit
Echoing from afar
Vibrating chords resounding passion
From depths of your guitar

Sing love’s tender,lonely songs
That always break my heart
Step upon the stage once more
Again before we part

Elizabeth Santos



[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 04-17-2000).]
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ESP
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1 posted 04-17-2000 06:50 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is so beautiful, I think it is what the French might call "triste"-romantically sad. Lovely poem....I stand as ever in awe of your talent with words and verse.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



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Jon Mewett
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2 posted 04-17-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for Jon Mewett   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jon Mewett

This is truly excellent Liz (if I may call you that)a lovely fluid easy to read piece from your heart.

Really Really Good.


Jon
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3 posted 04-17-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for twinsgd   Email twinsgd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twinsgd

Such grace you bring to The Pub with your poetry Liz.
Beautiful.

Jack
Martie
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4 posted 04-17-2000 02:16 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

He sang to me
his eyes closed tight
and reverie entangled
refrains that grew within his heart
where love is ever after.

I saw his spirit whisper
blow softly by my ear
and the words that flowed
will bring me peace
for all the coming years

Dearest Liz, thank you for this lovely poem and your thoughts of me...much love I'm sending your way.
Denise
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5 posted 04-17-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Elizabeth, this is absolutely beautiful!

Denise
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 04-17-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Liz, Thank you dear. I appreciate your reading my poems, and thank you for your very sweet remarks
Liz

Jon. Thanks so much for your comments
Liz

Jack, Thank you. What a nice compliment
Liz

Martie, Guess you can tell I was thinking of you today. Glad you liked this little poem
Liz

Thanks Denise
Love you
Liz
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 04-18-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth, my dear~
What a lovely poem you've written
for such a lovely lady.
Your heart is filled with such kindness.

*Martie~
Such a lovely poetic response.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 04-18-2000 11:55 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Elizabeth, this is absolutely beautiful, thanks for sharing it here with us.  
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how beautiful Liz
 
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