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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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0 posted 2000-04-16 09:32 AM



The Gypsy Violin


The compelling violin lures
with an irresistible yearn
Dance, dance for me
I can no longer adjourn !

Ethereal notes float from its strings
Caressing like lovers hands
Sensual music, Angel’s touch
Leading the way to wonderland

Embracing with utter delight
Craving, beckoning me
Tempting my lonely heart
Dance, dance on my melody

Faster, faster the music escapes
Without compassion to body or soul
Seducer of lonely hearts
Until dancing is my only goal

Faces gyrate while I dance on passion
Flashes of fire in the corner of my eyes
The violin plays like never before
Until I become one and loneliness dies

With a final cry and a final touch
The violin stops, the music ends
Leaving behind an emptiness
We’ll meet again, my violin friend


Munda

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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-04-16 09:48 AM


Yes, I'm first to respond to this marvelous poem you wrote, I love it, it's awesome.
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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2 posted 2000-04-16 09:53 AM


Gorgeous, Munda .....
I'm still dancing ...

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-16 11:31 AM


I love this, Munda!!! I just can't stop dancing! Thank you for sharing this with us, I think it's brilliant!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
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4 posted 2000-04-16 04:21 PM


Can feel the crescendo and tempo of the gypsy dance .
A fine poem Munda, I liked this.

Jack

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
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Colorado, USA
5 posted 2000-04-16 04:44 PM


Beautiful, Munda.  

Ah, yes, the violin is the most romantic instrument of all. It covers every emotion. Did you see "The Red Violin" yet?

~Gene


rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
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New Orleans, Louisiana
6 posted 2000-04-16 06:36 PM


i see this as much more than just a love of the violin, it's a love of all music and what it does to people, very well done if i must say so, munda.

rich-pa

 "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

Denise
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7 posted 2000-04-16 10:42 PM


Very beautiful, Munda!

Denise

PrincessPoet
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8 posted 2000-04-17 01:09 AM


Bestill, My Beating Heart.....
I really Like this one
Munda.
I could almost hear it, Good rhythm  



 Poetry & Frienship,
From: PrincessPoet

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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9 posted 2000-04-17 11:17 AM


Music really is the rhythem of life in all it's glory and it's gory detail.
I know of nothing else that captures this so well.
Your poem did.

More power to the bow of your violin Munda.

Jon


Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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10 posted 2000-04-17 02:07 PM


Munda,
  This is Magnificent!!
Hypnotic, Melodic and Exotic all rolled into one!!!GRRRRRRR
I mean WELL DONE!!!  
                     Dennis :^)

Munda
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11 posted 2000-04-18 03:50 PM


Thank you all for reading an replying.   I was listening to some Gypsy violin music and got a little carried away.  
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