Roses- Reply to "a cinquain challenge"

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Roses- Reply to "a cinquain challenge"

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-04-15 02:54 AM

Roses
Sparkling dew
Shining in light
Fragrance of angels drift
Heavenly.

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2000-04-15 07:29 AM

Rubies
Standing wild
With emerald leaves,
Swaying gently to the
Breeze

dear Broken_Winged_Angel,i think you have met the challenge very well indeed....

twinsgd
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

2 posted 2000-04-15 11:05 AM

Hey...these are getting better...nice touch Angel and Kaile

Jack

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-04-15 08:11 PM

hey, these are neat.. umm.. what is the significance of them? a particular number of required sylables? what? ^_^ curious..

Lynne

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-04-16 03:26 AM

Wow, a challenge well-met! I said I was gonna try this challenge...I will, I'll do it today! This is lovely though, I'll never be able to better it! I hope mine is also lovely if in a different way!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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