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Forever and a day

songwater
Junior Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.

0 posted 2000-04-14 10:37 PM

I'm not staying here because you wan't me to,
I'm just staying here because I wanted to.
You said I could go away,
but you know I'm gonna stay,
You stole my heart forever and a day.
You stole my heart and threw it in the wind,
about last night ,won't you stay again?
Whats inside you would never say,
you stole my heart forever and a day.
In the rain,standing on the shore,
peace inside like the ocean floor,
I could never turn away,
when ever you would look that way,
you stole my heart forever and a day

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

1 posted 2000-04-15 03:56 AM

This is beautiful. I really like it.

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

Strosek
Member

since 2000-04-08

Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa

2 posted 2000-04-15 03:58 AM

great poem, it strikes a chord deep down, thanx.

May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-04-15 06:13 AM

repetition is effective here..

Lynne

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

4 posted 2000-04-15 06:25 AM

Ah, ye. Thy poem doth its own justice. Good use of rhyme and as the lovely lady just above me has stated - good use of repetition too. Good feeling.

Jõmes

achicade
Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA

5 posted 2000-04-15 06:44 AM

Songwater, this is very beautiful. Sing it to me.

)

God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

6 posted 2000-04-15 05:13 PM

Beautiful song.

~Gene

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