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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia 
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Some nights I feel that I am giving my love to someone who doesn't really care I pour my heart out to her and let her know how much I care how beautiful she is how wonderful she is how much she means to me but I wonder if the love I speak of is falling on deaf ears I see her smile and I think it's alright I look into her eyes and see the beauty within but no matter how happy I am I always wonder if she really cares she won my heart but I am worried that she will discard it like a piece of garbage, unloved and unwanted I love her like anyone I ever have before but I don't know if she feels the same To find love is to know true happiness... to lose love is to lose everything |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That's one of the chances that we take when we fall in love. We just have to hope for the best. Denise |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
What a touching poem... I hope the subject returns your feelings and lets you know soon.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I hope your loving isn't in vain....like Denise said, love is chancey, ask anybody and they'll tell you so! Beautiful poem and all the best in love! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Lonely Shadow. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
beautiful poem, Love does have it's risks all you can do is love her the best you can and hope she comes to meet you with the same. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
you remind me so much of my friend,even your nickname is alike!! I liked this poem alot,love is such a struggle isn't it??¿ swampie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
This is just so touching, you know I am actually in the same situation as you do... she is living in my dreams I am never feeling alone my love tenderly speaks to her sweet little smile Well, I can fully understand your feeling of your love being 'discarded' and ignored, either willfully or unsuspectingly. But her happiness is always reflected in you. As long as she is there living happily, your life should also have meaning. Jõmes |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Lovely poem, Lonely Shadow. Why don't you try asking her how she feels--or better yet--give send her this poem. ~Gene |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what a dilemma you must be in,to love her so yet apprehensive about whether she will reciprocate ")i do wish you all the best ")Cupid leads me to ravishing you but what about me? Confusion allow me to write this informal cinquain for you ") |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
There is a Power greater than myself who Loves me Exactly as I am. Life is: A mystery, Unfold it. A journey, Walk it. Painful, Endure it. Beautiful, See it. A joke, Laugh at it. A song, Sing it. A flower, Smell it. Wonderful, Enjoy it. A Candle, Light it. Precious, Don't waste it. A gift, Open it. Love, Give it. Unlimited, Go for it Light, Shine in it. Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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