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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-04-14 08:28 PM


I looked at her to see
mascara running down the sides of her face
Mixing with a lot of tears
Of fustration mostly

She glanced at me through tear glass eyes
Like a rain showered wind shield without window wipers
Stoping to take my hand
playing with my fingers
carefuly fingering my rings

Then, something happened that surprised me
She smiled at me
A little smile
On her little face
What could I do but
Just smile back.

I took a tissue and wiped up the rain,
took her hand and walked with her to the playground
where she gladly played for hours on the swings

I sat watching
perched
on slanting monkey bars
knowing better than to leave my makeup just laying around.


       Hope you enjoyed this fun poem!
Yours,
Joy

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
1 posted 2000-04-14 08:49 PM


Very cute poem, Joy. I enjoyed it.  

~Gene

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
2 posted 2000-04-14 09:05 PM


hehe.. aah, very good.. indeed a 'fun' poem.  

lovely. ^_^

-Lynne

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-14 09:24 PM


This is sweet, Joy! It reminded me of when my daughters were little and getting into my makeup and now it is my granddaughter who is always asking to borrow mine! My, does time fly! Thanks for the memories!

Denise

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
4 posted 2000-04-14 11:21 PM


It's a touching fun poem Joy for some of us older ones...nice work...ty.

Jack

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
5 posted 2000-04-15 03:43 AM


How joyful.. I like this..  

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-04-15 11:05 AM


Thanks. I liked writing this, kind of like imagining having a little sis. Glad I brought back memories...good memories!  

Joy

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
7 posted 2000-04-15 01:47 PM


This is a very fun poem...so sweet!! I enjoyed reading it immensely!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 2000-04-16 05:15 AM


Thanks Joy, this sure brought back some precious memories.  
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