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sKiTtLeS
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since 04-12-2000
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wisconsin, u.s.a.


0 posted 04-14-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for sKiTtLeS   Email sKiTtLeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sKiTtLeS

Would you like to play a game with me?
I'll give you my heart, but I'll keep the key.

No more chances this girl's taking,
Her heart is too fragile to deal with such breaking.

The boys are the ones that like to play,
"You would if you loved me", they tend to say.

Poor little girl, confused and alone,
Looking for love that she never has known.

She gives in to the boy, and he steals her heart.
Meanwhile she's thinking, they never will part.

Poor little girl, losing the game.
For she doesn't know the rules aren't the same.

The boy walks away, the girl starts to cry.
But her head she knows, she must hold high.

Never again will she let a boy win,
With love and trust ONLY, they will be let in.

Would you like to play a game with me?
I'll give you my heart, but I've lost the key.

 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend
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Munda
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since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
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1 posted 04-14-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Nah, you just hid the keys.   Wait for the right person.....he'll give you three keys. Love, trust and honesty. Once they are offered you may accept.  
rich-pa
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since 02-07-2000
Posts 325
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2 posted 04-14-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for rich-pa   Email rich-pa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rich-pa

i know many friends who locked off their hearts completely after some idiot guy hurt 'em...at least the character in this one learned to use trust and love to let them in....good poem

rich-pa

 "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin
Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 999
Small Town, Somewhere


3 posted 04-15-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for Broken_Winged_Angel   Email Broken_Winged_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Broken_Winged_Angel's Home Page   View IP for Broken_Winged_Angel

Hey.. that's what I said too.  But there are guys out there that will take the time to either give you the keys to their hearts or help you find the key to yours.  Keep looking.     Love the poem, btw.

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing
Strosek
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Fourways, Gauteng, South Afric


4 posted 04-15-2000 03:15 AM       View Profile for Strosek   Email Strosek   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Strosek's Home Page   View IP for Strosek

Great poem, I'm one of the guys that offers my own key first, so I've experianced that from the other side of the line. But one day you'll find that speacial person who will hhold the key to your heart with pride, and cherish it till the day he dies.

 May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.

Yu Lan
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since 04-13-2000
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5 posted 04-15-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

nice poem.. I like the '2 line stanzas'.. is there a name for this style of poetry?

Lynne
childomine
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since 01-25-2000
Posts 822
st. petersburg, FL


6 posted 04-15-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Skittles this is very good.  As Munda said, someone will come along with the right
key(s).

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

achicade
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since 04-02-2000
Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA


7 posted 04-15-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for achicade   Email achicade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit achicade's Home Page   View IP for achicade

I like this very much.  The style with two lines is wonderful, as Lynne noted. I hope you find the key.

 God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-
sKiTtLeS
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wisconsin, u.s.a.


8 posted 04-15-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for sKiTtLeS   Email sKiTtLeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sKiTtLeS

Thank you all. I'm still looking for the key, but with a stronger self-defense it's getting easier.

Oh yeah, about the 2-line style.  I don't know if there's a name for it, I was just feeling this sort of rhythm when writing it.

Thanks again, especially for the support.

sKiTtLeS~
PrincessPoet
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9 posted 04-15-2000 09:31 PM       View Profile for PrincessPoet   Email PrincessPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessPoet

Skittles, Hi !

       Good Rhythm, and I can relate but, remember your Prince awaits, sometimes you have to go on about life and let your Prince find you hold onto your keys as long as you can before you share.

Poetry & Frienship,
PrincessPoet

ESP
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Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


10 posted 04-16-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is a lovley poem...the right guy will come along at the right time. Just be strong and look after your keys carefully!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Chico
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Posts 74


11 posted 04-16-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Chico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chico

sKiTtLeS,
  Hey this Is so true, and I have experienced what you point out here, But I have learned to keep both my heart, and my key, until somone comes along with a key that matches mine. Then And then only Will I allow that person to try to unlock my heart, and if there key works, and gets them inside the first door, I will give them my key, so they can have full access to all the rooms inside my heart.. take care now, and I hope you find the person, that, as someone already said, will treasure it, and guard it with his life.  Smile !


                    -Chico

[This message has been edited by Chico (edited 04-16-2000).]
SwŚmp§Faerˇie
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since 03-29-2000
Posts 357
Illinois


12 posted 04-18-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Email SwŚmp§Faerˇie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwŚmp§Faerˇie

LOVE IT!! This is an awesome poem!! I how it's compared and desribed.

swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
blackhalo
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since 02-15-2000
Posts 467
Denver, CO


13 posted 04-18-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for blackhalo   Email blackhalo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blackhalo's Home Page   View IP for blackhalo

I know that someday, the key will be regained, and nothing is ever lost forever!  My favorite saying was once, guys aren't worth it!
Alicia A. Renzelman
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