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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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**************************************************** Squirrel helps himself To the treats atop the pole My new BIRD feeder? **************************************************** Trees sway with the wind Waiting, watching open sky For a kite to eat! **************************************************** Kitty creeps up slow Calculating when to Pounce Stalks its' own shadow! **************************************************** I hope you have enjoyed this series of Haiku, I must for now take a Haiku Haitus to concentrate on other projects! LOL Dennis :^) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
These are great, Dennis!! They are all very clever, I love the way you add a twist to the end of them! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are great, Dennis! You are very good at these! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I've enjoyed your 'Haiku Week', Dennis Good job .....  |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Dennis you amaze with your skill at these. A very exacting form indeed. Jon |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Dennis, These are great. I can visualize these being written at the moment when these things occurred, especially the last one. ~Gene |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, what a talent you have for these, thanks for sharing them with us, and look forward to when you have time for them again. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*chuckles* These are truly delightful.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Dennis I loved all of them and I mean ALL !  What's next ? Ballads ? |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Very talented Dennis...these are good. jack |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I sure can relate to those squirrels. I sometimes think they think they are birds the way the devour all the seed. lol. Liked these a lot though. On the last one I couldn't help picturing my cat doing the same. He is so silly! Joy |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Do have another haiku week soon....  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
great ones! i love the kite eating trees--reminds me of PEANUTS!  "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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