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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
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0 posted 2000-04-12 08:05 AM


Love

I'm riding on within your moon beam of love
it lights my way giving strength from above
only in your darkest hour could you throw
me out to thee darkness for me to know
thy distance of love reflecting thee star
is reached within arms being circular.
Now distance elapse yet I feel close
as your thoughts and mind engross
mine every riding hour without you.
Upon mine return I shall give clue
thine desire overwhelms thy lips
while unto ye mine soul unzips
Thine journey forced reflection
of mine own minds detection
front and center all together
mine thoughts all a feather.
Sent mind soaring highest
doubt tumbles down crest
thine anger held hostage
whilst stood thine ledge.
Love's battle our desire
ways to douse thy fire
burning out of control
devouring thine soul.
Carry thou freedom
from thy kingdom
hold thy closely
enduring dearly
till thee forever
deathly sever
thy love boil
never spoil
engaging
enraging
lovingly
for me
for ye
love



[This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 04-12-2000).]

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-12 08:24 AM


This is lovely!!! So so beautiful....

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Denise
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2 posted 2000-04-12 10:00 AM


Very creative and romantic, Esmeralda!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-04-12 11:56 AM


           Esmeralda,
   This graphically pleasing,
      Delightful reading,
         words express,
           tenderness,
              love,
               Is
                !

            FANTASTIC!

            Dennis :^)


Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-04-12 12:10 PM


Could this be the tip of the arrow from Cupids Bow?.

I Love It.

Jon

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
5 posted 2000-04-12 12:11 PM


Like the presentation here, Esmeralda
This piece is Beautiful .....

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
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Small Town, Somewhere
6 posted 2000-04-15 04:28 AM


Tis very wonderful indeed!  Picture wise, word wise, reading wise.. I enjoyed it all the way..
Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138

7 posted 2000-04-18 05:28 PM


Lizzie: Thank you very much  

Denise: Thanks  

Dennis: Thank you very much, your creativity was very nice also.  

Jon: Thank you, I guess it could be, it's just the way this one worked itself out, but I like your idea.  

Pepper: thank you most kindly.  

BWA: Thank You.  

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
8 posted 2000-04-25 03:05 AM


well, that is a new way to write a poem, huh?! ^_^ I like it, E.P.. good presentation makes for good reading.. ^_^ U like to use old fashioned language, eh? ^_^
Ever written a poem where you haven't? hehe, might be quite a challenge, huh? I dare you.. try it.. I issue you a challenge.. write a poem, using no thees, thous, arts, etc.. (hehe)  

nice poetry, Esmeralda.. you write beautifully.

Lynne

jamesjiao
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
9 posted 2000-04-25 06:19 AM


I think this poem's been posted earlier last week. But it deserves more applausible comments, since it's just such a great, as well as uniquely creative, poem. As Yu Lan has mentioned, you seem to have adpoted old English. It's a great taste, and every word is well used. Keep it up, mate!!

 Sorrow is the starting point of happiness. Without sorrow, a man can never realize the true meaning of happiness.

Jõmes

Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138

10 posted 2000-04-25 07:09 AM


Lynn: Thanks for reading and responding with your beautiful compliments. As for your challenge I write all the time without old english, you must have missed when I told everyone who I am. Check out Lost Dreamer and you'll see your challenge met  

james: Thank you very much your applause reaches my heart and makes it feel happy, glad you enjoyed  

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
11 posted 2000-04-25 12:59 PM


I don't know how I missed this one. This is very creative. Well-done, Esmeralda.

---

Jon, I think it's a torch or maybe an ice cream cone, with Love as the ice cream (flavor).

~Gene

PrincessPoet
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
12 posted 2000-04-25 11:02 PM


Esmeralda Hello:

Creative Presentation,
Beautiful Work of Poetry
Love Is,...
A very splendid thing
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 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
          -Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
  PrincessPoet



[This message has been edited by PrincessPoet (edited 04-25-2000).]

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
13 posted 2000-04-27 05:11 AM


Ahh, u r right, I must have missed it Esmeralda. ^_^ Well, I am not quite sure where u mean for me to look.. Lost Dreamer?? well, I would love to read your other work.. I am not sure where to find it though.. can u explain please?  
Well, I think that's great, that u can write using both.. so great that such beautiful words can be remembered.. and so beautifully used..

Lynne

Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138

14 posted 2000-04-27 05:26 AM


Gene: Thank you very much, and I like the ice cream cone idea  

Princess Poet: Thanks for reading glad you enjoyed.  

Lynne: Esmeralda Ponsonby and Lost Dreamer are the same person writing just different styles, I did do one for your challenge by Esmeralda called, The Hand That Cradles. Thanks for enjoying her writing.  

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
15 posted 2000-04-27 05:55 PM


I see you did it again Esmeralda. Wonderful poem !  
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