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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-04-12 05:36 AM


Twas a dark, stormy night, When all that was wrong
Seemed only to be right, A life was lived long

The world was peaceful, War ceased to exist
Food was plentiful, And pain was forgotten

Then the doors where open, Shadows roamed free
Demons came out, To haunt you and me

Families were killed, Starvation was true
The dying race, Depended on you

Out came your sword, Your shield you held high
The stallion you rode, Chased demons all night

Now your praise is sung, All around town
The shadows you fought, Justice brought down.


 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

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Strosek
Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa
1 posted 2000-04-12 05:44 AM


What a great poem.

 May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-12 05:45 AM


This is a really good poem. Who is the knight in shining armour riding the steed and bringing justice to pass? Must be quite some guy!! I love this poem!

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-04-12 07:43 AM


I really like this.  I thought of Revelations.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


jamesjiao
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
4 posted 2000-04-12 08:47 AM


It's just so good. I have a lot to learn.

 Jõmes

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
5 posted 2000-04-12 09:11 AM


Excellent Angel.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-04-12 10:14 AM


Great poem! I always like it when justice prevails!

Denise

Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
7 posted 2000-04-12 11:37 AM


BWA,
  A fantastic poem! The imagery leap off the page! WELL DONE!    Dennis :^)

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
8 posted 2000-04-12 10:49 PM


Ahhhh.....nothing like a good story of chivalry!! =]

swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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