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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Last Chance Candle light shining bright Last chance For romance tonight Souls intertwine Both in love As heartbeats combine In your arms Forever kept Safe from harm A soft and silent kiss One of the things I will always miss You and me Fragmented heart Too much debris What went wrong Never spoken Heart without song Candle light shining bright Last chance.... No romance tonight Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Lovely Alicia, I know the feeling well, When it will end can anybody tell? Don't give up keep fighting the good fight, Perhaps there will be romance tomorrow night.  May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Alicia! Denise |
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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
this is a lovely poem alicia To find love is to know true happiness... to lose love is to lose everything |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Nice poem Alicia Good response John with good advice for you both. Jack |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Wonderful piece of work...*smiles* Jon did have good advice for you.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poem, Alicia....yet another....how do you do it? Anyway, I really enjoy your work as it is all lovely. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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