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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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0 posted 2000-04-10 12:35 PM



Moon beams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

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Flowers Resurrect
From winter's retreat slumber
Celebrating Life!

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 Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^)


© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Esmeralda Ponsonby
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1 posted 2000-04-10 12:45 PM


I loved these, they are so beautiful.
Munda
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2 posted 2000-04-10 01:17 PM


These are great Dennis. Do you have more ?  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-04-10 08:32 PM


Very good, Dennis!

Denise

Gene
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4 posted 2000-04-10 08:46 PM


Very nice, Dennis. I especially like the first one.

~Gene

Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-04-13 10:55 AM


Thank you for your Generous and Kind comments!

Thank you Esmeralda!

Munda, As a mater fo fact I do have a few more (LOL)!

Thank you Denise!

Gene, I also like the first one best, Thanks

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-04-13 12:30 PM


Beautiful...simply beautiful.
What more can I say?
These two little haikus
Have brightened up my day!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
7 posted 2000-04-14 06:48 AM


This are beautiful.. I love them.. Do you have more you're going to share with us?

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

kaile
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8 posted 2000-05-29 02:21 AM


these are so beautiful..lucky me for reading them!!
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
9 posted 2000-05-29 07:43 PM


Wow!  Simply beautiful and perfectly written.  You have the soul and heart of a poet, you write haikus so well my friend!  And I absolutely LOVE haikus and senryus!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
10 posted 2000-05-30 12:11 PM


dennis..these are great!  youre having too much fun!  but so glad you are so WE get to read them  


 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

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