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twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

0 posted 2000-04-08 07:52 PM


A different problem perhaps?

You posed a good question on making a living
No problem for me, but rather it's sleeping.
I work at my job, from  dawn until dark.
And then hurry home and my backside I park.
In front of this screen, and then I start reading,
and writing and laughing and crying and weeping.
I cannot escape , I can't stay awake
But I will, for there's no time for sleeping.

Jack


© Copyright 2000 Jack - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2000-04-08 08:54 PM


Thanks for solving that question.
I had been losing sleep over it
I certainly appreciate your sharing your personal schedule with us. Now this probably explains it for many, but I have a suspician that perhaps some are doing the poet thing during (dare I say) working hours. Anyone guilty of this? Please speak up.
Thanks for the great little poem, dear poet
Liz

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
2 posted 2000-04-08 09:31 PM


Certainly know the feeling there Jack.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-08 10:14 PM


Sounds like me before I was laid off from my job....now I spend days and nights at my computer. Cute poem, Jack!

Denise

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 2000-04-09 01:17 AM


Delightful response poem to Liz's piece,
Twnsgd ....  


 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-04-10 01:23 PM


Guilty ! LOL Great answer to Liz's poem.
twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
6 posted 2000-04-12 01:04 AM


John
Denise
Pepper
Munda
           Thank you all for reading....so we are the ones not sleeping huh...and the rest of them?

Liz......Nobody wants to step up and fess up...guess you called it...LOL

Jack

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
7 posted 2000-04-12 05:02 AM


*raises a hand*  Guilty....I'll admit it.. I work graveyards and go on-line at work.. Go home to my "kids" (((pets))) and make sure that my dog gets plenty of excercise.. Sleep a few hours.. More often then not lately I'm up talking with friends and/or adopted families.. Go to play practice and then come back to work... Without the work time for on-line, I'd never get here.. *smiles sheepishly*

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

freckles
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
8 posted 2000-04-13 01:11 AM


Jack--Ok, the lack of sleep to be online I can attest to......as for using a puter to go online at work, don't I wish!!  On a very rare occasion, I can slip on long enough to send an e-mail out to a friend to let them know of, say, upcoming schedule changes....but that is very rare.  It's now after 1:00 in the morning, though, and I have to be up in six hours, and the laundry STILL isn't done........so, I guess you could say I go online at the expense of some other things!!  Great response to Liz's piece, Jack.< !signature-->

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by freckles (edited 04-13-2000).]

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