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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia 
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As I sit here I remember the night of my first kiss I was afraid to touch her my shyness overwhelmed me then as if some force controlled my very being my arms began to wrap around her I held her close to me as our hearts beat in unison soon my hand, as if by instinct gently caressed her cheek then in one gentle motion I touched her lips with mine even on this cold night I was filled with warmth and love my heart racing for dear life my mind overflowing with emotion and as I saw her beautiful smile I became lost in her eyes those eyes that shine like sapphire stars I couldn't help but realize how much I cared about her then, once again I showed my love for her with a kiss I remember that moment as if it had just happened and I long for that day to return To find love is to know true happiness... to lose love is to lose everything |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
First kisses and first loves - they never disappear from our memories or our hearts. This is a sweet poem< !signature--> ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem. I brought back some sweet memories.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those first kisses are so special! The ones that follow aren't too bad either!! Lovely poem! Denise |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
Oh, how special that first kiss can be...and yes, I still long for special kisses too. This poem has great flow and reads smooth. Lots of good imagery too! Very well done! I have blue eyes, so the line about sapphire stars really caught me! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
That first kiss is so very special .... One that is never forgotten ... Really enjoyed your piece, Lonley Shadow ...... "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars." _Les Brown_ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I am still awaiting my first kiss.....I hope it is as special as the one you describe. Love and hugs, Lizzie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lonely Shadow, Ahhh....to be young and in love again. You describe it perfectly here. Excellent job!! I do not think any of us will ever forget that first kiss. Thank you!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Very touching. As the others have already said, you never forget your first kiss. "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything." - anonymous |
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