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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138


0 posted 2000-04-08 11:31 AM


Thy Knight Of Mind

Thy forest air it bleached thy sight
to walk I do within thine own fright
savored dignity alone I beseeched
solemnly now to thee I so reach.

Thy steed is ready for thine mount
no distance rode shall ever count
as when avenging for thine crown
thy weaker knights alas will drown.

In anguish now I sit awaiting news
did thy sought knight win or loose
battled on now curse thine ground
thy knight of mind gone not found.

Cold anger defiles thine loud wrath
thy knights suffered ye bloody bath
no dignity inherit can save ye souls
I shalt set ye to char o'er thy coals.

Canst now thine desires ever devour
thee knights who guard o'er thy tower
forthright ye only dismiss thine name
hence royalty hast played thy game.


© Copyright 2000 Esmeralda Ponsonby - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-04-08 12:06 PM


I have one word for you: Brilliant!  I love the way you portray life in such nifty(for lack of better words) ways.  Thanx!

 Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-08 09:47 PM


Another great one, Esmeralda!

Denise

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
3 posted 2000-04-09 02:45 AM


Another good one indeed Esmeralda, enjoying these.

Jack

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
4 posted 2000-04-09 05:46 PM


Beautiful! I love the style you have chosen for your poetry. I could never write anything this elegant. Well done!

 "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything."
- anonymous

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
5 posted 2000-04-09 10:34 PM


This is great. I think some how i see many of your poems as lessons from the past that still hold true now.Very wonderful =P i love your poetry.

swampie


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138

6 posted 2000-04-10 11:39 AM


Alicia, Your pedelstal of me is much to high especially since I'm afraid of heights. Thank you most kindly, I'm glad you enjoy what I am writing, for it's a new experience for me.  

Denise, Thank you, fine lady.

Jack, So glad you are enjoying, I thank you for reading them.

Jonas, never say never, this is not something I ever dreamed I would be doing, yet here I have an audience that makes me feel I'm doing it right when I just feel amazed. Thank you very much for your kind words, just know you could do this also, if I can.  

swampie, Thank you very much, this is very fun to portray poems this way, most write themselves so if there's a message maybe I am one of those people, gee I can't think of their names where people talk through them. Anyway glad you enjoy.  

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