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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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Tears fall..Pain grows.. People leave..Who knows.. Tomorrow comes.. Another day.. People leave.. They go away.. All alone..By myself.. People leave..No one else.. All alone..Standing here.. Pull the trigger...No more tears. If life's worth living, why do I always cry? Please someone tell me, why can't I die? MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I am deeply moved and deeply disturbed by this. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is a powerful exspession of frusration. Sometimes we all feel this way. Write more poetry,run 'round the block a few times,sing ,dance ,listen to music,read a book,come to the corner pub. Go let it out. Jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this is so disturbing....may i use this haiku to cheer you up? Hope from a Bug Whirlpool darkness sets Specks of warmth from firefly Solace's path ahead i am very disturbed by this...are you going through a difficult patch?....i can't do much but you can always post any dark poetry here and i will try to offer some comfort.... life's worth living,my dear,don't give up!!!  ") [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Very well written. Broken, this gripped my heart and touched my soul. Hit me in a personal way. Pulling the trigger means no more tears for the person with the gun but MANY days of endless tears for those left to go on. Depression is not an easy enemy to do war with but each battle can be won - a single day at a time. Is this about Josh? < !signature--> ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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J Joyner Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 14 |
Another Haiku to help cheer you up. Darkness envelopes Sorrow, pain and anger overwelm Tomorrow brings light None of us are ever truely alone, even though it may seem that way. Their are friends all around, just some of them you haven't had the opportunity to meet yet. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
A powerfull poem, to be sure. I hope you were expressing the level of frustration and not actually considering the act. I echo my fellow poets.....pulling the trigger is not the answer. Keep writing...I look foward to reading more of your work. INclan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very painful, very powerful poem, Broken. Please check your email for a message from me. HUGS Denise |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Lots of friends for you here Broken and they won't desert or leave you. Jack |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Yeah, we are all here for you always. Don't give up, there can be blue skies around the corner. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, this is disturbing ... Broken, you might not believe it now, but trust me when I say, there are better days ahead .... And you certainly will never be alone, here at Passions .... I too, look forward to reading and enjoying more of your work ... Sending ((((HUGS)))) |
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JC Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
A wonderfully sad poem, it brought tears to my eyes. Please know there are people who care |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
TO EVERYONE WHO RESPONDED: I've been trying to get back to each of you on a one to one basis. If I've failed, I'm sorry. I wrote this a while ago when I was feeling really depressed. A lot of bad stuff kept happening, one thing after another. Near where I used to live, up hidden away in the hills, was a place called The Poets Table. I took a walk there, wrote this, and spent the day contemplating life. I watched the sun set and was filled with the feeling that after coming so far in life, there was still much to be done. I didn't mean to disturb anyone. I was just feeling blue again. I've found that re-writing or reading "No More Tears" helps me remember all I still have and not to focus on what I've lost so much. Thanks to everyone for showing you all care. A wise man once said "Some people make the world a better place just by being in it." I'd like to point out that each of you are one of this people. Thanks again, Nicole MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
Another Peak into that soul I wish to mend, your poetry has again touched my heart. May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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