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gumpno New Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 3 |
This is the second poem i have written to JENNY WE have found over internet ,have fallen in love , and have seen each other on the last friday the first time. I will soon come back to US. I love u JENNY I believe that everyone has got a star in the sky which can be seen by the other one who u are in love with. MY STAR Your Star is shining for me, everywhere where i used to be, i could see it in the darkest night, cause it shines so clear and bright, it shows me the power of yur heart, but i can only see a part, cause it is far and hard to reach, but it is love in what i believe, every night i look at him, i could see the invisible string, which connects u and me, everywhere where we used to be. NOTE : ALL MY POEMS ARE NO TRANSLATIONS FROM GERMAN INTO ENGLISH |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
this is great, I'd like to read the german version  if you feel like posting it as well ... Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Lovely. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
may i try to write this haiku for you? MY STAR Starry night sky glows~ A sparkling star winks at me~ Like your charming smile... [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Jenni6478 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 11 |
Babe.....you are SO beautiful..I just want to hold you right now.....this poem is so lovely and I appreciate you wanting to share your feelings about me to others...I'm so happy that my star has connected me to you...I feel so lucky to have you in my life...I love you always, my baby Love, your Jenny |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Beautiful expression of your love for Jenny. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply lovely ! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful expression of emotion here. Wishing you two all the best in love! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely poem for your Jenny |
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