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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-04-07 11:12 AM


Our Love

As I walked through the streets
I muffled the thoughts
Of our love
And the joy it brought

I thought we'd be together
Forever in time
Our love was special
Straight out of a rhyme

We floated on our cloud
Like Romeo & Juliet
Our love wasn't forbidden
But it was one no one would soon forget

You got in your car
And decided to flee
That's how I began
My silent plee

Now you're gone
And I start to cry
Why you?
Why did you have to die?

Maybe someday
We'll be together again
Me in your arms
Maybe He'll forgive your sin.


© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-07 12:00 PM


Very very sad, Alicia. Nicely written.

Denise

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-07 12:54 PM


Sorry about your loss...your love sounded beautiful. I hope you find another special someone to share your love with again.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-04-07 03:00 PM


Alicia,

Soooo sad, but beautifully from the heart.  You will heal one day and then be ready to accept another love.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
4 posted 2000-04-07 03:04 PM


I am sorry Alicia. I wish you all good things.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
5 posted 2000-04-07 03:36 PM


Very sad Alicia.....but looking at "Fair Warning...."  I am sure you have what it takes...best wishes.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-04-07 08:41 PM


What a sad poem! I am sorry for your loss...
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