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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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0 posted 2000-04-07 07:40 AM


Luigi he create your hairstyle so perfect
I come from Milan with my hot Latin blood
You don’t only come to me for your hairstyle
You come to Luigi ‘cus he make you feel good

I float ‘round the chair my scissors a flashing
In the big rounded mirror you may catch my glance
As I move in close with my soft gentle fingers
And oh how I tease you, your thoughts start to dance

Your eyes start to sparkle I know that your scheming
My hand like a butterfly massages your head
And later that night I know you’ll be dreaming
And I’ll be there. ……Beside you in bed

On with shampoo see how it bubbles
We talk and we joke we even may flirt
But you got big husband I don’t want no trouble
And now your quite coy as you straighten your skirt

There!…. we all done and you look so radiant
You hurry back home and… he will adore
But give it few weeks as you slip down the gradient
And you’ll be coming back to …..Luigi for More


Jon Mewett



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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-04-07 09:26 AM


Jon,
That is so cute!  I like your style of writing.  I hope to see more of you soon.


 Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

Denise
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2 posted 2000-04-07 10:19 AM


This is so cute and so funny!!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-04-07 11:37 AM


Jon, A delightful journey , good narrative!
Enjoyed the trip! Dennis :^)

rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
4 posted 2000-04-07 03:25 PM


um...ok.  that, that uh, that scared me.  no offense.  it was a good poem, it just scares me.

rich-pa


 "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
5 posted 2000-04-07 03:29 PM


Brilliant Jon....another smiler. I love it..I can almost see you..you smoothy

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
6 posted 2000-04-07 03:33 PM


Jon,

This was really cute and amusing.  I enjoyed it.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-04-08 02:44 AM


Rich-pa I spose it was a bit Sweeny Todd SORRY!!

Thanx Everybody.

Jon

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
8 posted 2000-04-08 06:36 PM


This was great Jon most enjoyable.
Best watch out for Luigi's brother Mario tho'

Jack

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
9 posted 2000-04-08 06:41 PM


This was great Jon most enjoyable.
Best watch out for Luigi's brother Mario tho'

Jack

tom
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 90
s/w penna u.s.a.
10 posted 2000-04-08 09:06 PM


Jon

With a glass of red wine--cheerssa--

tom

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
11 posted 2000-04-10 12:42 PM


Great poem, great style, great fun.  
Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
12 posted 2000-04-11 01:57 AM


Brought a smile to my face.. Well done...

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

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