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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Please excuse my writing everyone You see I took a shot, My arm's blown off I'm all alone and the end, not quite, it's not. We bowed in sweet surrender, to the angel in our midst. But what he forgot to tell you was the McNastie,s made the hiss, you're right, there will no more be fight, the poor trolls were all blown up. This faerie, she did escape the blast, and lived to tell what's right. The McNastie's, now they rule the earth, you see they have the might. But beware you fools who heedeth not, The warning that I bring. When evil thoughts invade your mind you will turn into one of them. So now I lay me down to die have sympathy, but not for me. But say a prayer, for all the evil folk, Because being "Nasty" is an awful thing. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Help I don't want to be a nasty. Jon |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I don't wanna be a Nasty either... I like this poem though! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Great Poem, I permit you to lay down and let the evil die, but that's it! The rest of yourself must stay. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Jack this is a good "final, final" finale  with a good message....Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Twinsgd, Your endings more realistic, And so annihilistic, In the world we live, This would be the way, But I dream of a solution, To end this vile polution, That we may see a BETTER day. Thanks for your interaction on this theme. Peace Dennis :^) |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Jon and Lizzie...as Nasties you would be total failures...far too nice...both of you Truth be told there are no nasty people in the pub...maybe a poem about that ......Hmmm howabout "I Love Poets".....oops Elizabeth has that one covered rather well. Lost Dreamer...staying...with or without RCMHR...lol Kim....Thank you....yes this is my final answer. Dennis .....thanks for the fun , you write so very well...been a pleasure. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
twin, I've enjoyed this continuing tale. Maybe McNasty could be resurrected into McNice!!! Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Another goodun Jack. I shall be careful with my thoughts and deeds... May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Give McNastie some McNuggets and a shake! |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Sheilaaaaa.......we can't throw stuff at a McNice!!!! John ....speaking of your thoughts....I just read your "Tip For Life".....funniest thing I ever did see John McNuggets.....surely you jest PdV...this was serious business going on here, .....but I could sure use the shake thank you. |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Jack--This is wonderfully written. As Dennis said, I fear this is a more realistic ending, but we can always hope and pray for better days. I have truly enjoyed keeping up with the McNastie saga; you two have been great! "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I agree with everyone! No, not really. Though I can say that I wouldn't like to be a McNasty either. That, I will agree with. It's kind of a shame though, that the McNasty's will now be ruling the earth. Thanks y'all(can you tell i'm from texas?) for such a wonderful interaction with each other, it was, to say the least, entertaining. So, what series are we going to start now that this one is over? LOL, Hardy, Har, Har, HAHAHAHA, . . . . . Alicia Renzelman |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Freckles ...thanks for the compliment, it was fun. Alicia.....Glad you enjoyed.......Next hmm....what's your favorite thing? Jack |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hehehe, I love these poems ! |
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