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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I challenge you to have a look Into my eyes and say What it is you see in there Is it true what they say Some say I have the power To look straight into their hearts Some say my eyes are piercing Seeing every secret thought Some see the joy and laughter Or catch me wandering Some see the hidden pain That lays deep within Some see the love I feel For friends to me so dear Some dare to have a look At my innermost fears Yet no-one was able To see the "all" of me I challenge you to have a look And tell me what you see Only the one who dares To have a real good look Will find I truly am Just an open book Do you dare to enter The windows Of my soul ? Munda  |
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J Joyner Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 14 |
That was pretty deep Munda! I'll bet whats behind your windows is pretty complex. J |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
A novel approach Munda. I accept the challenge. Tell me where or when  May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Munda!! Great poem!! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is an amazing piece Munda. As J said, pretty deep. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Your poem really describes the way ALL people are. We wait and wait for someone who can come along and see the whole person,not just the surface,and not just ONE element of the person. I'm one of the fortunate ones who have found that person =] And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I haven't seen all of you, but I like what I've seen. And I liked the picture of you and your daughter. Very nice Liz |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Munda, A poem as deep as your eyes. I'm up for a good challenge, but first you'll have to take off your sunglasses. ~Gene |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Munda--A deep and touching poem.... I hope that someone gallantly meets the challenge head-on and sees "all" of you. I'm glad they are windows to your soul and not doors. "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Behind every beautiful face there's some kind of pain. Bin to the bottom of a whirl pool of lies Aint looking for nothing in anyones eyes. Do we ever TRULY know each other? A very thought provoking poem Munda. Jon |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This was great, Munda, and intriguing challenge if someone can't see all of you they are missing out on a great person!!! The one that will see all with out judging or forming opinions exists out there one day you will meet Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I wish I could look through the windows...seeing into your soul and seeing who you really are would be a real treat. Just like reading your lovely poem was. Beautiful job on that poem, Munda! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I'm sorry to say, it seems that is the way all people are. I have yet to find a person that isn't overly concerned with the outside shell, rather than the hopes and dreams that lie within the window of our souls. I wish the world weren't so self-centered, but it is people like the ones who spend a lot of our time in the Pub, that can change that. Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Munda, This is a wonderful piece. So many people don't even try to look through the windows of our being. I hope someday to find someone who does and I hope you do too. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Munda, Though I've only had a glimpse of you electronically, I've posted a response to your challenge,(I'm working here with limited information) LOL Dennis :^) |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i loved it more than my own mother...ok maybe i don't love it that much but i thought it was a great poem because it captures my life at the time almost perfectly. rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
So well written... I loved it... so deep ...the concept...windows of a soul... i would always say the mind had windows... the soul...another lesson from munda... i loved the concept.. great! If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
J.J. - Yep. I am a complex person, that's for sure. ; ) John - Next week Friday, Den Haag, 8.00 p.m. LOL Denise - Thanks gal ! childomine - Thank you very much. S.F. - I'm so happy to hear true love really excists. Cherish it. Elizabeth - Thanks girl. I promise, what you see is who I am. The time of wearing masks is long in the past. Gene - LOL They're blue, very blue, and when that Dutch wit comes out, they're greenish. When I've cried, they're red and when I'm asleep, they're closed. freckles - Thank you. Who knows, someday someone may be brave enough. : ) Jon - Thank you. Do we ever truly know each other ? I don't think so, but it's nice to wish for. StarrGazer - Thanks gal. Who knows huh ......some day. ESP - You're welcome anytime ESP. (((((HUGS))))) Alicia - Than you and I agree. The Pub is a place where true friends are found. Sasikat - Thank you. I'm sure we will some day. Dennis - What can I say ? I just read it. Thank you my friend.  ((((((((HUGS))))))))rich-pa - (((HUGS))) I know how you feel, but it's not so bad and I'm still happy. Avanti - Your the sweetest ! ((((HUGS)))) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Oh Munda, you gave me too good a challenge, keep your eyes open I'm looking in. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I kept my eyes open and found two treasures. Thank you Gloria and Dennis. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Beneath our skin lays our soul Exposed to no one Layers keep away those who want to find Windows of our souls Just reflect The bright sunshine. But can one get into our mind? What do ya think of that one Munda? I loved this poem, absolutely loved it! Awesome work. Joy |
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