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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-04-06 02:04 PM


Thank You

You made the world seem right again
Made dark gray clouds disappear
You made the sun shine bright again
And showed me there's nothing to fear

You taught me to love once more
Held me up when I was down
And never once showed me the door
Never once portrayed me as a clown

We soared high on your velvet wings
It was perfect for the time
We ceased to think of the bad things
That might suddenly end our rhyme

Thank you for being there for me
Thank you for showing me what I was to find
Thank you for letting me be free
But, most of all, thank you for being mine




 Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
1 posted 2000-04-06 02:12 PM


Beautiful.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-06 02:33 PM


Ahhh, this is so sweet and so beautiful!!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-04-06 07:39 PM


This is so sweet Alicia.  Your love expressed well.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 2000-04-06 11:31 PM


Simply beautiful.
twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
5 posted 2000-04-07 01:37 PM


Very pleased for you Alicia.
Wonderful poem.


 Jack

From day to day, nothing so surely defines the quality
of our lives as the unwavering affirmation in the eyes,
in the voices, in the presence of our friends. It is through
them that we truly begin to know ourselves; and it is
their affection that assures our dignity and worth.
- Robert Sexton

Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
6 posted 2000-04-07 02:35 PM


Alicia,

Sooo sweet and pretty.  Well written.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

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