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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-04-06 01:58 PM


Faithful

You hold my devotion
In your hands
A part of my life
A single grain of the sands

You have the ability
To change it all
You decide
Whether we stand or fall

I won't desert you
I've never tried to run
Why start now
When our fun's just begun

I will be faithful
Forever I promise
A symbol of my love
Sealed with a kiss

Be my Romeo
I'll be your Juliet
Our love is something
I won't soon forget



© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
1 posted 2000-04-06 02:31 PM


He is a lucky man

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-06 02:32 PM


Very lovely, Alicia!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-04-06 07:37 PM


Beautiful.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 2000-04-06 11:34 PM


Very nice poem, I liked this part:

"Be my Romeo
I'll be your Juliet
Our love is something
I won't soon forget"


freckles
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
5 posted 2000-04-07 12:09 PM


Alicia--This is a very lovely poem.  Your "Romeo" is lucky that he has such a wonderful "Juliet."

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

6 posted 2000-04-07 05:45 AM


It is the east Etc.

Lucky guy.

Jon

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