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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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0 posted 2000-04-05 05:54 AM


The room is fragrant, dark and quite still
As I tip toe across from the small window sill
The sweet balmy air is fresh and so mild
As I gaze upon my new sleeping child

This is such a magical place
As the moonbeams play upon her face
When I touch her warm soft fingertips
A smile is playing upon her lips

Carry on sleeping my sweet little girl
As I look on my thoughts are a swirl
I hope that your dreams are gentle and sweet
As ten tiny toes I count on your feet

May His grace descend on your little soul?
Bring you great joy and make your life whole
And when you are older perhaps fully grown
May you rejoice in the wondrous seeds that are sown?

I know you don’t know as I gaze on you here
Through this life of thorns I’ll endeavour to steer
So when I look down from the heavens above
You’ll know that I tried to wrap you in love

There there, my sweet please do not wake
Carry on sleeping your gentle rest take
And then in the morning when the dew does descend
We’ll hold you together your mother my friend


Jon Mewett


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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
1 posted 2000-04-05 09:56 AM


This is so touching Jon. The love emits in waves from your words.

Beautiful thoughts of
your baby girl penned
wonderful sentiments of
her mother, your friend.

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-05 03:11 PM


This is a wonderfully touching poem Jon. I can just feel your love for that child and her mother leaping out from your words.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-04-05 03:20 PM


Very sweet and loving poem. Beautifully said.

~Gene

Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-05 07:44 PM


This is so tender, Jon. Our little ones are sure awe inspiring, aren't they?!

Denise

KimW
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
5 posted 2000-04-05 07:46 PM


This is very loving and tender.. and what wonderful words of love for both the child and her mother.

Kim

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
6 posted 2000-04-05 07:48 PM


My hat is off to you in admiration again Jon.
Excellent. I know that feeling so well.

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
7 posted 2000-04-05 08:37 PM


Artist at work here.
Absolutely stunning Jon.

 Jack

From day to day, nothing so surely defines the quality
of our lives as the unwavering affirmation in the eyes,
in the voices, in the presence of our friends. It is through
them that we truly begin to know ourselves; and it is
their affection that assures our dignity and worth.
- Robert Sexton

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-04-06 07:17 AM


Thanx everyone your kind responses are my inspiration to keep going on writing.

child- Thanx for your verse.

Twin-thanx a million.

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
9 posted 2000-04-07 12:44 PM


I wish you could see the expression on my face when I read your poetry.  Thank you so much for the inspiring words of wisdom you offer us all here in the Pub.  Wonderful poem, people don't understand how much feeling can occur in just a few words.  Thank you for sharing such beautiful feelings with us.

 Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
10 posted 2000-04-07 03:08 PM


Jon,

This is one of the most love filled poems I have ever read.  It warmed my heart so much to feel the love here.  Such love is so rare these day.  

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

11 posted 2000-04-08 05:48 AM


Thanx Alicia it's really wonderful to think of someone enjoying these things.

Sasikat-I feel truly lucky,my family are my inspiration. Thanx for your kindness also.

Jon

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
12 posted 2000-04-08 05:50 AM


A tender lullaby written with love
Liz

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
13 posted 2004-12-25 10:05 AM


how precious~
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