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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Rag Doll I was a rag doll to her as a child when all in life taken away slow I was the one she came to know. I saw her cry all her oceans dry for only rainbows would she die, she grew up and became a teen and was a most beautiful scene. Now I would cry as she dressed in clothes that were royally blest, she drown them with her essence but her life still held many lessons. I'd watch her dream of her future when still a teen needing nurture, she held the heart of a gallant lord who's passion she could not afford. Her plate innocently full of desires to a point of inextinguishable fires wherein a child lies an adult walks so to others they permiss in talks. One day a crown she will bequest and will be granted she's the best, the prince she chooses will be tall I know this for I am her old rag doll. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a really interesting poem!! Welcome to Passions, I look forward to reading more of your work. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
An unusual viewpoint. I like it. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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J Joyner Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 14 |
Very Moving. I have teenage daughters and, although not a ragdoll, I can see a lot of where you are at. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is interesting indeed. Sounds a bit sad. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Esmeralda, What a sad/sweet tale you've woven here of a child/girl/woman transition. Your insights are from a new perspective and thought provoking. Thanks for the great read! Dennis :^) |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
You all are quite kind and I thank you for your compliments, I am amazed at the different thoughts this brought to your minds, it's really quite interesting. This has nothing at all to do with me or anyone I know, this is being told from the rag doll Esmeralda Ponsonby point of view as I read a very interesting novel, I loved her name so much that I had to use it as an alias. I thank you all again for your compliments. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
I loved reading your poem,it really kind of makes a person think. I love poems that are from other veiwpoints,other than human.l...it's an interesting study =P And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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