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Chico
Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

0 posted 2000-04-02 10:19 PM

Farewell Avei!

  I'm moving on,
Leaving you behind.
  Soon you'll be gone;
And out of my mind.
  It won't be easy,
to leave you like this.
  But soon I'll be free,
and rid of this bliss.
  I gave you my love,
yet you weren't phased.
  you just gave me a shove;
And left me dazed.
  My heart would cry;
you would just stand there.
  Can I ask you why,
you didn't seem to care?
  Couldn't you just see,
My love for you?
  It was there publicly,
for all to view.
  Were you so blind;
That you couldn't tell?
  What was on my mind?
Or'd you want me to yell?

  So I'm leaving you Avei!
You've cause me so much strife;
  And you just couldn't see,
That for you I'd give my life.
  But I'll still love you.
as I always did,
  I've just so much to do,
So farewell to you I bid...!

songwater
Junior Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.

1 posted 2000-04-02 10:26 PM

Wow Chico,great poem.

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Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

2 posted 2000-04-02 10:30 PM

It's hard to say goodbye to someone we love.
Nicely done!

"Writing is easy. All you do is stare at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead."
-Gene Fowler

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2000-04-03 09:41 AM

Wow, you expressed yourself very well in this poem, walking away is hard, but in the long run you'll be stronger.

John the cat
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 357
England

4 posted 2000-04-03 02:18 PM

I love the poem Chico, but I still think you should tell her.

May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

5 posted 2000-04-03 04:17 PM

Lovely poem...I enjoyed it loads.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Chico
Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

6 posted 2000-04-03 07:03 PM

I really Appreciate all of your comments, your right it is hard to say goodbye, But I think it is the best thing to do, John thanks for your thoughts, and mabey your right, But I think this is going to be the way I will go, mabey I'll still tell her someday, I don't know.. Well thanks again!!

CHICO.

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