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songwater
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.

0 posted 2000-04-02 08:05 PM


If I should ever loose my legs
No longer could stand free
Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me?
If I should ever loose my eyes
No longer could I see
Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me?
Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me?
Would you hold my hand,would you look for me?
If I should ever loose my voice
No longer could speek free
Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me?
If I should ever loose my mind
No longer could dream free
Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me?
Would you hold my hand,would you speak for me?
Would you hold my hand,would you dream for me?
             Would you dream of me?


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© Copyright 2000 Bobby Barfield - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-02 09:02 PM


This would make a beautiful song!

Denise

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-04-02 10:26 PM


This is beautiful Songwater.  I absolutely love this.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Jonas
Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
3 posted 2000-04-02 10:32 PM


I love this piece! Very lyrical!

 "Writing is easy. All you do is stare at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead."
-Gene Fowler


just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
4 posted 2000-04-02 11:40 PM


This reminded me of a song to. good job its great  
ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-04-03 04:48 AM


Lovely!! Why don't you set it to music?!?

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-04-03 07:04 AM


This poem danced in my eyes, and I agree you should make this a song, maybe you already have and it's delighted other's ears with it's beauty. Thanks for sharing it here with us at Passions.  
songwater
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.
7 posted 2000-04-03 09:31 AM


To everyone at Passions.You guessed it, yes my poems are songs I have written.I really appreciate all the positive feed-back.

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Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
8 posted 2000-04-04 06:05 AM


Songwater,

This is absolutely beautiful.  And, if the person's love is true, the answer is yes to all of these questions.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

achicade
Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA
9 posted 2000-04-08 08:45 PM


Yes.
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
10 posted 2000-04-10 12:36 PM


Yes, this definitely sounds like a song. Well done !
Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
11 posted 2000-04-11 07:44 AM


It's wonderful how you make our minds hum along with your words... Beautiful.

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

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