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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Why am I still alone Can you tell me? I've given my heart But you are not phased Are you cold, inside? My heart is breaking And you just stand there Can you tell me why? I've watched from a distance Yet you never noticed to busey with yourself! While my heart cracks, down the middle I had dreams of us But you are too vain to love anyone, besides you I've given my all I've cried from sadness Can you tell me why? Are you so superficial, that you can't see my unconditional love? I'm tired of it This is my farewell Instead of waiting and hoping I'm moving on You've had my love; yet stomped it to the ground Well I'm here to tell you I'm forgetting you! No more asking why Love is wasted on you So my heart will find someone else And forget your self-centered hide! The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I hope you find someone more deserving love. He certainly isn't. I can relate to this a lot. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Good poem. A lot of things covered here. Saddness, weakness, self-doubt and in the end - strength to move on and forward. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Chico Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 67 |
hey dhuron, I apreciate this piece. I like the way you put it. And I know exactly how you feel, cause I am in the same position, and I am having to do the same thing, which is forget the one I loved, but that did not love me !!! CHICO !!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Powerful poem! Good for you! Some people just aren't worth it! Denise |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Finding the strength to move on is not an easy task, but something that must be done at times. I hope you find someone deserving of your love. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Great poem, looks like you have pondered over this for a while and have found the path that will bring you peace of mind at least, good luck to you I'm sure the right person is waiting in the wings.  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yes, sometimes it's better to move on. I hope you'll find someone who gives you as much love as you have to give.  |
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