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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2000-04-01 05:11 AM


I have never been in love before but this is how I think it should be.

I’ll know....

I’ll know when my love comes along.....
He’ll look into my eyes and see into my heart.
He’ll smile a special smile just for me,
We will always be together, never apart.
His touch will send a surge of electricity through my soul,
I will melt into his soft and tender embrace.
My lips with his slender fingers he will trace,
So in love will we be.

The man of my dreams will never betray me,
His love for me will be so real.
I won’t ever have to worry about being alone,
He will promise me that with a kiss as the seal.
His kiss will fill my heart and soul with everlasting joy,
We will walk beneath the stars all night.
With him everything will seem so right.
So in love will we be.

I have never been in love before,
But I’ll know when everlasting love comes along.
He will always be able to make me happy,
He will fill my heart with a beautiful song.
His love will be my life long pleasure, forever and ever,
We’ll dance in the moonlight- dance all night.
Into my life he will bring dazzling light.
So in love will we be.

Forever and ever, till death do us part,
I’ll love him with every bit of my heart.
So in love will we be.



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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-04-01 05:22 AM


ESP.

This is a lovely wish I hope he deserves YOU when he comes along.

When love beckons you follow him
But as his wings enfold you
So may he crucify you.

If you want to laugh but not all of your laughter
Cry but not all of your tears
Bid him Farewell

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
2 posted 2000-04-01 09:41 AM


Beautiful poem Lizzie, and you called it.....that's exactly how it will be.
"Into my life he will bring dazzling light"........nice.

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-04-01 12:07 PM


Well done Lizzie. You do need to be careful though. The emotions can blind you sometimes and you do not get a clear picture of what you are getting. You have to be able to see with both your heart and your eyes my friend. Only when you can accept someone for who they truely are can love be everlasting. (Always remember, there are always tears and pain evn in joy an bliss)  
childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-04-01 12:36 PM


I agree with Marilyn.  You did a good job with this but, be careful. The heart has a way of blinding our other senses.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
5 posted 2000-04-01 01:47 PM


A lovely poem. I hope it all happens as you wish.
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
6 posted 2000-04-06 03:38 PM


Lovely poem ESP. I hope you'll find what you're hoping for.  
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
7 posted 2000-04-07 06:47 AM


For someone who's never been in love, you seem to know what it's all about. you will know when you meet that special person.
Lovely portrayal
Liz

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
8 posted 2000-04-08 04:36 AM


*smiles*  I wish you luck in finding the perfect man for you... and the love your peom describes so sweetly...
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