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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Isolation Is This A small crab Washed up on a high rock The midday sun raining down upon his back An earthworm The steel hook already a part of him Dangling in his watery grave Waiting for a fish A guiltless man The noose tight around his neck The trap door creaking beneath his feet A newborn baby Fighting for his first breath In the arms of his starving mother Me without you I have no air I have no blood I have no voice I have no mind I have no touch I have no reason I have no feeling I have no will My body has no soul This Is Isolation [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a spine chilling poem, I truly enjoyed reading it. Keep posting!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is very good Jon. Evokes a lot of emotion. Gave me the chills too. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully done!  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Please don't stay isolated to long your deep poetry sings like a song in a world far away you slow dance your words into form for our glance Talent rides you away into a sphere where you write so well for us here to delightfully emote us with words flutter and flying like graceful birds [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx everybody for your comments. Thankyou dreamer for your wonderful verse. Luckily this was only a moment But all of these moments will be lost in time Like tears' in the rain. Jon |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
WOW Jon. I haven't been here long enough to have seen anything so deep from you. Powerful stuff mate. |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
jon Me without you I have no air I have no blood I have no voice I have no mind I have no touch I have no reason I have no feeling I have no will My body has no soul This Is Isolation beautiful as always |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Jon! I'm glad it was just a passing moment for you! Denise |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
This is too deep for me Jon.....*shivers*...is there not another "lane" around your neck of the woods? |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Yep Twin ther's a whole world of lanes 'round here. I think I'll go for a stroll. Jon |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Very good poem Jon ! |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Very powerful. Definately is very spine-chilling and well written. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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